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Title: The kitten Post by Whiskey Tango Foxtrot on Aug 11th, 2014, 7:22am A fickle kitten slowly slips Its raspy tongue around my rim The joyous circle, brightly wet Licks tender faces, feet and skin The kitten grows and sharpens fangs I see his teeth will test my brim A nibble tests the sturdy edge, Finds timber, bones, and meat within He hisses death and claws my face My presence here enrages him His ripping, tearing, frothy teeth Crush earth and stone, rip flesh and limb A pretty face and cozy fur Make syren purrs the bleakest hymn A laughing meal, all light and joy Will stroke the kitten, dark and grim |
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Title: Re: The kitten Post by Whiskey Tango Foxtrot on Aug 18th, 2014, 1:04pm Hint [hide]The quiet kitten licks my feet As days of summer ebb and flow An angry kitten's fangs and paws Push heavy buildings to and fro[/hide] |
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Title: Re: The kitten Post by towr on Aug 18th, 2014, 10:46pm Sound like some kind of [hide]natural phenomenon[/hide]. I was thinking [hide]sea or ocean[/hide], but I'm not sure.. |
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Title: Re: The kitten Post by gotit on Aug 19th, 2014, 2:30am I was thinking along the lines of some kind of [hide]grinding machine/device[/hide] |
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Title: Re: The kitten Post by Whiskey Tango Foxtrot on Aug 19th, 2014, 5:21am [hide]towr almost has it.[/hide] |
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Title: Re: The kitten Post by dudiobugtron on Aug 19th, 2014, 6:42pm I keep thinking I've got it, then reading the next line and finding it doesn't fit well! Some verses make it seem like [hide]A storm, with the joyous circle being the sun or a cloud or something[/hide], while others make it seem more like [hide]the sea, with it's frothy teeth, and the tide breaking against things. Perhaps it is a tidal wave?[/hide]. |
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Title: Re: The kitten Post by raven on Aug 24th, 2014, 12:35am I see a [hide]pier, jetty, or dam[/hide] as the kitten is clearly water or the ocean. [edit] I'm a bit short of time to dig into this right now. [/edit] |
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Title: Re: The kitten Post by thomamat68W on Aug 25th, 2014, 11:07am A ship doth sail on the sea When a storm hits suddenly Amidst the storm, the sailors doubt As the ship is tossed about. The hull can't stand against its wrath The ship doth plunge, sinking fast Once the sea has done its deed The calm returns, a beautiful scene |
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Title: Re: The kitten Post by Noke Lieu on Sep 19th, 2014, 8:23pm I'd offer [hide]wind[/hide], but the hard work was done already... I'd then offer the sun as well.. |
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Title: Re: The kitten Post by Whiskey Tango Foxtrot on Sep 20th, 2014, 4:33am [hide]Pier is probably closest but many fine answers here. Anything shore related would work[/hide] |
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Title: Re: The kitten Post by thomamat68W on Sep 20th, 2014, 9:33am [hide]cliffs that waves beat against?[/hide] |
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Title: Re: The kitten Post by oceanvibe on Nov 25th, 2015, 2:15am [hide]Cliffs?[/hide] |
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