Transelating "The Waste Land"

The transelations by stanza

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0. T.S Eliot

What are the roots that clutch, what branches grow

Out of this stony rubbish? Son of man,                                  

You cannot say, or guess, for you know only

A heap of broken images, where the sun beats,

And the dead tree gives no shelter, the cricket no relief,

And the dry stone no sound of water. Only

There is shadow under this red rock,

(Come in under the shadow of this red rock),

And I will show you something different from either

Your shadow at morning striding behind you

Or your shadow at evening rising to meet you;

I will show you fear in a handful of dust.                             

     Frisch weht der Wind

     Der Heimat zu

     Mein Irisch Kind,

     Wo weilest du?

"You gave me hyacinths first a year ago;

"They called me the hyacinth girl."

- Yet when we came back, late, from the Hyacinth garden,

Your arms full, and your hair wet, I could not

Speak, and my eyes failed, I was neither

Living nor dead, and I knew nothing,                                    

Looking into the heart of light, the silence.

Od' und leer das Meer.


1. Yehonatan Sella

Wet are the roots that drink; wet branches glow

out, in this stone near a bush. Son of man,

you can knot sayings or guesses, for you know only

a web of pulsing images. Beware of the sun that beats,

and the debt regives snow shelter; the cricket knows relief.

And the driest tonal sound of water – Only

here does shadow wander this red rock.

(come and smell the shadow of this red rock),

And I will smell something different from

your shadow at morning striding behind your

shadow at evening rising to meet your

eye. Well, show your fern a hand full of dust.

First you wet the wind,

then he met you.

The Irish kind.

“Who are you?”

“You gave him hyacinths first a year ago, right?”

“I wanted to, but I never did.”

--Yet when they came back, ate from the Hyacinth garden,

mouths full, hair wet, he could not

speak, and his eyes feasted, he was definitely

living, and he knew nothing

but hunger, his heart light, the silence.

Let him eat in peace.

 

2. Devin Tasker

The branches fall under weight as the roots drink everything

From this arid stone, surrounded by forest. Adam’s children,

You tangle words and guess at their meaning, for you only know

The material world. You fear what might be behind the burning sun,

And bury yourself in snow – and debt. Crickets know more freedom,

And listen to the driest sound of water.

Careful, greed runs through this bloody stone.

(You can smell it to the core of the rock),

But I still smell something worse:

Your shadow at sunrise, which is no different,

Than that at sunset. You can see both.

Life turns to dust in you hands.

You tried to drown the wind,

And that’s when he met you.

Just the luck you needed.

He knew of the shadow,

And you gave him promises to rid it, didn’t you?

But no action came, no results.

And when we came back, he too lived in shadows,

Mouth full, hair slick, unable to speak.

His eyes gorged on everything.

He was of your living, knowing nothing

But hunger. The light of his heart silenced.

Let him eat in solitude.

 

3. Laura Gianonne

I don't understand the things that grab, that cinch into

piles of cast offs. Nat Turner,

slaying cans, dresses, forests of knowledge

into pools here, under broken mirrors,

another drinking another whip, another endless sound,

dirges crumble in this dry place. On deeds

here that hide in a valley of monuments where shadows lengthen under solitary stacks of ancient sea creatures, packed under

years of pressure into burning slabs, jabbing against the sun and heavy horizon

(sun into sun into shade and onto sky they burn),

Irises doused in another ether,

the hottest part trailing from your heels will reveal how it really walks

and the coldest part how it really sings;

Dust storms frequent this place and fling red earth against the air.

Finding what the wind

does hitting you

my iris kindling

whittled dust

"I got the last of the blooms before a God tore them away;

"I was branded reaper."

-We set sacks, plates, homes of cinched rows of blooms,

dulling our embrace, and you a harlot, I pushed

to say, but my irises had already faded away, and I knew her

I knew she was dead,

dust locking the parts of speech.

Ships disintegrated on dry waters.

 

4. Emma Tome

Idols underpin the flinging drab, crying

onto punctured castings, soft. Naturalized, turning,

slating candles for destruction. Burnt, forced

foliage. sins too cruel here, undid broken mirrors.

a brother sinking, mother hips. Another lessened pounding

another lesson directed rumbling, christened with grace. On feet

weary and riding the swallowed mountaintops, where

shadows sink into daylight, creating ephemery,

racking expired algae, compacted and pressurized, fearing puncture –

burnt, grabbing for last pieces of horizon

(run and run and into the sky we turn.)

Irises methylated creatures

the lost parts failing to conceal, revealed

congealed frozen ears, ringing ­–

Rust forms sequined faces and filth flung against the air

sighing, the winding

does subsist, too

my eyes resist melting,

whitened, lost

(I fought and fought and fought and fought)

wetted, slackened backbones racked and hardened,

I knew we had reddened,

rust locked our parts in place,

hips undistinguished fixtures.

 

5. Aly Wong

Gods in the dripping under-pinings, sobbing

onto the broken structures, seeping. unnatrual.

The candles are burnt and awaiting destruction, lonesomely in the forest night.

Empathy and sins, masking glossy mirrors.

A mother dying, her brother's hips poudinging the ground

with a misdirected feat of grace, his

face and feet shallow the

moutaintops whole

Shadows sink with delight and then

die expired.

Compact and pressurized,

Burnt.

Fleeing and fleeing from the

irises, the mythical creatures

the lost parts failing to reveal

the frozen rust forms with the old familiar faces

the sighing and winding

lose the battles and the whiteness

Such savage attempting backbone hardness of

Red.

The rust kept them together.

 

6. Rebecca Wells

Ghosts in the griping, pining softly

into the brought structures, sleeping strangely

The candles are learned, waiting demarcation, winsomely in the firelight

Empty signs that make clots, mires

Amethyst drying, her brought ships poaching the sea

with a mighty face of greeting - this

foot - place - shadow in

tumultuous tops hale

Shades think with the light, then

expire with sighs.

Come back - pressured,

learned.

Seeing and sleeving, frame the

lilies, mystical creations

Delos - the parts sailing to veil

frothy rights dream of ancient unknown visage

the flying and writhing

Loss, battailles, wickedness

Such saving, temptation, one bone soft

are read -

In the dust we read them together.

 

7. Rose Booker

Dave Chappelle in the grip, pines softly

into UPN buying CSW, sleep without

the writers, learned, democratic strict,

win some in the lost fire

Umpteen signs make clothing, hire

Amy dying, her hope brought ships broached on land

With a lighted face Eat -- his hand

lace dow sha ni

Tumultuous lops ale

Shades ink with blood, en

pire x with lies

ack cum pressured,

Earn education

in sleeves dame framing he

lies, stical my eat Kyria

Delos the stops ailing the ill

Frothy rights beams of young known visser

fly withering

moss, Bastille

Much shavings tempt the soft bone

reading

dust them together

 

8. Jessi Redfield

Drunken captains on great peaceful seas,

upon bright clouds, slumber withheld.

White letters divide suns

with savage, longing filled flames.

Dump some make-shift cloth here,

overboard, depths hopeless with shipwrecked, broad islands

withheld by lounging Earls, whose handsome

faces, down, shown now.

Tremendous loping alps

shake into blood, like ink in

pens crossed; within liars,

axes come sharpened.

Even educated

on slick domains framed heatedly,

lying, cynical, mind eating crystal

delves the stoical ailments of ill-fortune.

From writing becomes unknown visions;

flutter, wings,

moss, begin.

Mulch shaves time from silken branches,

readying,

the dust template.

 

9. Jennifer Chin

Sober fish drift on oceans wide and bright, never closing their eyes.

Black numbers multiply moons with peaceful, longing filled digits.

Perfect this painting here, overdone, and yet hopeful with narrow lines withheld by a painter's handsome strokes brushes, up, sideways.

Puny loping apes dot the border, like ink in brushes crossed;

within the air, arrows fly taut.

Although educated on fire and heat, lying, horrific,

controlling diamonds separate the torments of the future.

From writing comes unknown visions; flutter, wings, breath, stop.

Mold steals time from silken arms, solidifying; the dust template.

 

10. Andy Iser

Boring fish floating in oceans wide and bright multiply in the blackness of the moonlight,

the son of man as an overdone painting turned in late,

who is hopeful that the nervous lines of a true painter are seen in the right light,

who knows apes evolve both ways, just depends on the way ink’s crossed,

the first time around hiding within the shadow of a red rock,

educating by fire and heat, in day and night, the torments of the future are known not,

no blood diamonds, liars, horrifying atrocities, just writing and vision,

fluttering wings, whistling branches,

things solidifying from dust.


11. Sandra Khalifa

Soaring, swish, floating in potions, writhing fights divide the white moon's fright.

The sun of man as an overtone faint and, burned in fate.

Who helps the fool - the nerve; he dines by blue paint, or green in the red light.

Whose nose gapes, revolves two ways, in the deep end of the winter,

The worst time for biding, while the shallow bed rocks.

Edge of the gate, by wires and feet, in black and white, the remnants of the future are in knots -

noble blood, diamonds, friars, war-defying black cities, fighting precision,

stuttering slings, wistful mansions,

wings soggy like wine from rust. 


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